Hastily (aka shit) recorded black metal

[ratsapprentice]

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13342996/99.mp3

Random song I put together today, didn't practice it.
You can tell

 

[ratsapprentice]

Re-jigged it fairly significantly, I'm still having trouble getting the snare to sound good, and am pretty clueless as to what to do with it.
That second riff is making me cringe, it's so shit.
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13342996/99 - 2.mp3