Help a brother out

[Thesilentcircus]

So i just put this together really quick, i used Addictive Drums w/presets i found on here and just tweaked for what i personally like. I used a Podxt for the guitars and bass, and the stupid lol vocals. I just want to know am i going in the write direction as far as mixing things goes?

Also id love some constructive criticism, and what is too loud.too shitty, etc. etc.



http://www.yousendit.com/download/U0d6MWZLbEpKV09Ga1E9PQ

Edit: Just realized how similiar this sounds to Cloudkicker hahaha oops.

 

[ahjteam]

Also id love some constructive criticism, and what is too loud.

Maybe don't push it so hard against the master bus limiter? And where is the low end on the scream? Otherwise sounds pretty ok