Help me improve the vocals. plz<3

I don't think the vocals are the problem, though they could be a bit clearer. Your guitar sound is scooped (read: thin), which is the problem, and that will only be fixed when you add bass and fiddle with that a bit. Sorry bro :p
 
sounds like the vocalist is cupping the mic, which is a no-go. but i agree with xnaysaturo, guitars sound like they can have more balls, but see how it sounds after a bass track is added. digging the music though, sounds like a non progressive within the ruins.