Help needed

[Bryantnick]

Im just started out recording my own music
and i need all the help i can get.
so plz if you dont mind have a listen
me let me know what i am doing right or wrong
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/8203649/New song new master.wma

 

[barricade]

First thing... record it tight enough.. right now the drums and guitars are rly rly off beat/tempo/whatever!
And your master is pumping ... bring it down a little,,,

 

[Bryantnick]

First thing... record it tight enough.. right now the drums and guitars are rly rly off beat/tempo/whatever!
And your master is pumping ... bring it down a little,,,

thanks dude i need to bring my mix down