Help Please!

[mikeydavies]

Hi i have been recording for abit and i'm new to this site, i dont really know what to do ha ha so be kind please!

Here is a new mix i'm working on, just an idea at the moment, just wondering what people think and how i could improve on mixing/mastering etc. (dont ask about the star wars sample. we're all massive nerds in my band.)

using joey sturgis truth gold kit for drums, podfarm for guitars and bass and logic's own for strings and choirs (i know i really need to get eastwest)

thanks loads guys ! here's the link

http://soundcloud.com/trashtalkstudios/test-mix-track-2/s-Ly8KW

 

[lelahel]

link doesn't work

 

[mikeydavies]

updated the link, will work now thanks!

 

[HCL]

Everything sounds a little out of tune. Bass is too prominent, I'd add more dirt to it so it blends in better with the guitars. It doesn't need turning down so much as blending in.

 

[mikeydavies]

ok thanks will have a bash in abit