help with mix (natural drums) heavy hardcore

Sounds like there's too much room mic sound or overheads perhaps. Bringing that sound down will reveal a more punchy snare/kick and give more umph.
 
Something's missing... there's a lot of stuff in the mid-range though. It might be a room mic or the hats. Definitely feels like you've got some really open mics somewhere which is diluting the "force" of the track.

Other than that, it's cool