Help with my mix!

[Enjoilloyd]

Hey guys, I'm quite new to all of this, so I figured I'd ask for help from the professionals.

I want my mix to sound more clear! I love Of Machines and Woe, Is me.
Is there anything obvious you guys can point me to for my mix to make it stand out a bit more?

http://soundcloud.com/enjoilloyd/new-song-rough

 

[richard.ackroyd]

Personally id say add more low end to your kick

also your bass could be brought forward, makes it bigger as a whole.
good tune man, but woe is me have really fucked up with their reissue

 

[GearMan2point0]

Pumping......