Any advice for my rough mix?

olivertuck

Sinister Sound
Mar 8, 2013
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I'm new to this forum (Dont worry i am not one of those retards who ask stupid questions) I was wondering if anyone could tell me the good and bad points of this mix, like whats good, what can be improved, how can i make it better? Any help would be really appreciated, its only rough and definitely can improve.

Atm im using slate 3.5 shells, sturgis emerald cymbal samples, running the guitars line in through tse x50 and s-pres high, and zombass for the bass guitar.

Heres the mix: https://soundcloud.com/olivertuck-1/test-mix-1