Help with my new mix

[lanky noob]

so this is the best mix i've done yet, seeing how i'm a complete and utter noob in every sense of the word.

any help would be greatly appreciated, and be as harsh as you like, criticism is always good

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/71178437/test bounce for martyr.aif

EDIT: it's not mastered at all, hence why is really quiet and stuff, and i've just realised the vocals need to go down a bit

 

[lanky noob]

anyone? help would be massively appreciated

 

[Siguros]

403, get the public link

 

[lanky noob]

done, hopefully the link should work now

 

[Siguros]

still 403 D:

 

[Siguros]

Make sure it's in the public folder, then right click it and select public link. Should look like - http://dl.dropbox.com/u/13387317/movmou mix new.wav

 

[lanky noob]

right if it doesn't work this time, i'm going back to soundcloud :L

 

[Siguros]

Works now, yeah vocals need to go down! The clean singing could use some work, lacking enthusiasm Can't hear any cymbals at all, so they could go up a bit.

Guitars sound good, lead is a bit high at times.

 

[lanky noob]

cheers!