Hey whats wrong with my mix? :(

[pexproduction]

Hey whats wrong with my mix? please help me and give me feedbacks...

Ps. i got two versions of it which one is less bad

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15142545/Teria meno distorta 2.mp3

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15142545/Teria originale +3db.mp3

Thanks a lot

Mario

 

[Scott Horner]

The mixes don't sound bad at all but the first one sounds better to me. Both seem to be pumping a bit and the auto-tune is really odd and distracting. The song would be really good if you just backed off of the auto-tune.

 

[FIXXXER]

there is some low frequency warble, boom something that destroys the actually good mix.
vocals are...uhm...

cheers
S.

 

[Dalinkwent48@aim.com]

bass frequencies are really killing the mix, the screams sound like theyre pushed too hard as well.

 

[pexproduction]

Thank You very much! I'll try to fix it!

...hey im a noobie, and i got a question maybe stupid, but, where is better to cut bass frequencies in the master Eq or on each tracks?

Grazie
Ciao!

 

[Binary Encoded Sunset]

The second one sounds fuller to me. However, the drums are a little too hidden. You should definitely lay off the auto tuner. Work on it until you can't tell it's being used.

 

[Binary Encoded Sunset]

Thank You very much! I'll try to fix it!

...hey im a noobie, and i got a question maybe stupid, but, where is better to cut bass frequencies in the master Eq or on each tracks?

Grazie
Ciao!

I'd do it on the tracks that require it only.