Italian Noob :) what do u think?

[pexproduction]

Hi everyone Its me Mario! Im new here... Im from Italy and i need some feedback and insults i recorded my friends band for fun and i would like to understand what is wrong with my mix and master... here a sample:

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15142545/song.wav


Thanks Guys
Mario

 

[RLab]

I dig it, very Maylene-ish
But imo the snare is a bit strange, it lacks of body. And I would personnaly bring up the bass just a bit

 

[pexproduction]

Hey thanks for the advice what about now?

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15142545/Anteprima 2.mp3

Ciaoo!