hi all, listen to my new song.

[bodom578]

hi everyone. i've only posted on this forum a couple times, but as i read it more and more i've started learning alot. so i decided to try and post here more actively.


anywho, so i recorded this song today. been working on it for about a day or 2. its still not complete, its only a fraction of it. but before i go any further with it i'd like to get others opinions on it. the mix is definitely not the best, at the moment i'm mainly concerned with the song itself not just the mix. any criticism is welcome. thanks in advance.

http://soundclick.com/share?songid=7585532


equipment used-

ibanez prestige RG2550z

line 6 toneport, with a marshall 75b impulse (don't remember where i acquired it from)

audio technica AT2020(for the one growl/scream in it lol)

east west symphonic orchestra

superior 2.0


think that's about it, let me know what you think, thanks again.

 

[Icony]

The beginning bringed Halo's soundtrack to my mind. Choirs give it a nice touch. So the song sounds good and littlebit different so far (as far you get those blastbeattones in control).
Toms, kick and snare are too "high", *napsnaps, clickclick*and drums need overall more body. Leadguitartone is nice, but rhytmguitar rone is littlebit buried and kind a weak.
Not bad, but for starters you should work with your drumtone.

 

[bodom578]

nobody else?