What do you think about my metal song?

Pretty cool, the guitars could be tighter though (playing wise). It seems like you could kick this song up like 5-10bpm and it'd be more interesting too. I can't really comment on the mix since I'm on my laptop though.
 
Hi all,
HexTheNet - thanks for comment
Many people wrote that guitar sound is very bad.
Yesterday at night I redesigned sound. Now new mix reuploaded on soundclick and myspace.
Changes in sounddesign:
1. Guitars sound.
2. Drums sound, especially snare.
3. Many other things- reverbs, bass sound, etc.

Waiting for your comments.
 
intresting
snare a bit higher +2 db and so the kick
synth fx is not well EQ-ed....
at all not bad...


Thanks for comments. There is no synth only drums+bass+guitars. I think that you wrote about guitar tapping - I did not use different EQ settings for this fragment. May be this is neglect, thanks.
 
hi again,
I re-uploaded new mix on soundclick and myspace pages (see first post).
Changes in sounddesign: little more bass and more power and lows in snare sound

Waiting for your comments.