Hollow Ground - Left Blind /Master/ HELP

[ownkiller]

Hello guys,
check one of my first master.JUDGE ME!

 

[Deadstar]

the whole mix is pumping a bit. Tame some peaks, clip the snare but most of all try to work on the low end, it seems kick and bass are fighting too much. I wish my first mixes were sounding like this
I love the tune btw \m/

 

[ownkiller]

Last version...I think, better.