how can i improve this mix?

[r41nm4k3r]

Hello guys, i am new here and this is my first post. I guess i am not a virgin anymore

Anyways, i have been recording for a long time but i know i still have a lot to learn. http://rapidshare.com/files/216500080/nakarat_mix.mp3 This is a very small clip from a song i have been working on. I would really appreciate if you guys can give me some feedback and ideas about the mix. Thanx

 

[88mph]

Put your file into public folder on getdropbox. Bu arada hoşgeldin.

 

[r41nm4k3r]

this is the new, working link. http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/865491/nakarat mix.mp3

 

[88mph]

Well, I checked it out but it's hard say anything about the sound cos the file is at 128kbps. Could you upload another version with a better quality please? (192k or above). (Nice melody though.)

 

[r41nm4k3r]

I am glad u liked the melody. I just uploaded 256kbps version, thanks for reminding cuz I have found out that I have been encoding 128b mp3s since I reinstalled Lame.

 

[Black neon bob]

bit too short to gather what is going on the mix, you know.. in full songs you get individual instruments, drum dynamics, etc.. so it's hard to judge from this very short sample, but it sounds good to me.. maybe a bit too scooped, too much high end? not really sure what to make of it from this wee clippy, and yes.. nice melody!