Hey Matt, nice work.
Here's my thoughts: It's got that patented "Matt Smith" rhythm guitar sound for sure. Great stuff. Very in your face & great bite.
Drums need some work. It's not a bad sound, per se, I just think the hi toms could use more defintion & the snare could use a little more bite as well.
Another idea: get a great big verb happening on the low toms during the breakdown around 1:30. Right now you've got "junnnnnnnn tick tick" it should be freakin' cannons there.
My only other gripe is that the single lead line at 1:00 seems a little thin. I'm not sure what you can do with it at this stage, but if you've got a dry track, try reamping at a much fatter setting on your amp.
Don't read too much into this... I'm only nitpicking. Overall, it's some great work. Keep it up.
-0z-