How does this sound so far?

[xmarcelx]

I'm new to recording. I've done this at home .. nothing expensive used! Just home recording! My ears aren't trained! What do you think? pointers? It's just a short part, no bass! The left guitars should sound better than the right one!

*Edit*!!!
redoing the mix...

Thanks!

 

[chadsxe]

I'm new to recording. I've done this at home .. nothing expensive used! Just home recording! My ears aren't trained! What do you think? pointers? It's just a short part, no bass! The left guitars should sound better than the right one!
http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=5285A92C6E0B2465

No bass?

 

[xmarcelx]

No bass guitar! Or what was the problem?

 

[chadsxe]

No bass guitar! Or what was the problem?

I was double checking before I opened my mouth. It sounds like you are on the right track though. It really depends on how the bass fills in the low end.

 

[xmarcelx]

When I recorded the guitars I wanted this loose omph at the end of the note .. like often used on breakdowns ... maybe I have to do more low cutting ..
and I put some multiband on the master...
and yeah fill in a bass would be the next task... I think that's not that simple!

 

[xmarcelx]

updated ... see first post!

 

[Jackal_Strain]

The drums sound a bit fake and distant. And the guitars are a bit sloppy played, but I like the riffs.
Doesn't sound bad, considering that you are new to recording

 

[xmarcelx]

thx for the response!
Yeah it's played sloppy I have to redo the guitars! And the drums are fake ! Maybe too much verb on the drums!