definetely got a bullet for my valentine feel. Cant think of the song but its the one thats like "i saw you ruuuuuunnn awaaaay" hand of blood maybe. I dunno. it doesn't sound bad but it needs bass for sure and maybe wet the drums a little more?? I personally like dry drums but for what it sounds like you're going for you could benefit from it. Also, the guitars seem louder or more panned to the right.
I dont even attempt to start mixing until the entire song is finished. Too many times I've tried to just fit certain things in after the fact and failed. Im sure its possible but for me one little addition changes another track.