I dont see any grammys on ur shelf either.

[RiZzo Rokz]

or do u? just kiddin Gawwd...so anyways i wrote about the pangs of addiction...the first verse is more from the users onlookers...narrated by moi..the 2nd verse is more on the perspective of the vice its self...i know where im limited at so go eazy on me.

 

[kylendm]

Oh. My. God.



Why are you posting this on a metal forum??

 

[RiZzo Rokz]

cuz i dont know what to call it. i still have fun making it though..does that count? plus someone might like it...it might just help someone...plus i dont really care where i post it as long as it gets heard....i hear it on every forum i post it on...the what the fucks...the why u posting it here...i just gotta keep on like the brady bunch.

 

[kylendm]

Here, try posting it on this forum.

http://www.ultimate-guitar.com/forum/forumdisplay.php?forumid=51

It's a bit more broad and people might be able to help you out and might be more interested in the music than people on here.

 

[S1770]

RiZzo Rokz Dont ever let Egotistical , Self Worth Criticisms from anyone make you Give up writing and Creating your songs Man ,

People who show these negative traits even if they get their one shot at recording are not and will not be accepted in this industry for very long.

Some of the Best Songs ever written were penned from Life challenges By Compassionate and Humbling People,

keep learning the craft brother

S1770

 

[LiberaScientia]

Gotta say though, a rap song is pretty irrelevant to a primarily metal-based mixing/production forum if you're not actually looking for mix crit.

 

[Habsburgs]

i like it

 

[updog]

hahahah thanks for sharing.

guitar sounds pretty out of tune at times, and since your vocals aren't too much in tune either it has this kind of lunatic feel to it. this might be the idea too, dunno.

i think this song could work if you'd make it more aggressive. have some aggressive riff layered in there. lose those drums and get some better smackin ones. maybe push the vocals a little too if you can.

 

[FIXXXER]

dat shit waz weirdddddddddd

 

[ArnaudM]

It is UNIQUE. Carry on, I have no idea how to call that, Death Psychip-Hop maybe. I'm loving it, strangely. Don't know if it is honest or just kidding, but in a very psychotic way, it does work well, and I'm surprised to like it.

 

[SocialNumb]

I rarely check this section of the Sneap forum but I'm glad I caught this.

 

[JakeAC5253]

Haha, love you man. Keep posting, you've got a "fuck em all" attitude, and I find that to be very metal.

 

[XxSicRokerxX]

Give me a song like this right now!

 

[Fox Mulder]

Pretty cool!

 

[AceFireForce117]

Actually i enjoyed listening this ! Continue man !

 

[RichS]

Troll

 

[TropaDelTerror]

funny the first 30 seconds XD

 

[RiZzo Rokz]

i hate that alot of people identify this with rap but i can see why.....when i post it on a rap site theyre like what is this some punk?...i feel like a mixed kid..freakin mariah carey....i kinda like it here so i figure i can develop into what im trying to be and sound like..this doesnt touch the ideas in my head but i have to advance on my skills...ALOT of good feedback and im just glad yall listened...the feedback was a bonus!!!


if there was a "like" button i would of pressed it on everyones comment..ty.

 

[Sloan]

BEST NEW POSTER 2012

 

[kev]

I was going to write some terrible abuse but this is actually so fucking ridiculous i love it