Ha ha I actually quite enjoyed that, though, I'm a sucker for Neurisican bands that do that kind of thing well. Though obviously in about a year's time everyone's going to be as sick of them as they are the predictable post-rock bands and the 'look at us we're wacky' Locust/Daughters rip-offs.
You didn't cover ALL the cliches though, you didn't do a throaty roar over every part of the song whether it's appropriate or not a la Baroness or Cult Of Neurisican. I mean, Cult of Luna.