I need help for some lyrics

[Domson as TIOBS]

I am a German musician and I've been writing my own lyrics for a long time now. Most of my lyrics are English, and now I'm facing a little problem: I am going to record my album during summer (not in a professional studio, but never the less ) and at the moment I don't have anyone to control if there are any mistakes in my lyrics. Is there anyone from the US or from Britain who is interested in Lyrics an has a decent language knowledge (well, an average one would do good work too ) and who has the time for helping me out? Please understand that I am careful with posting them in public, so please just let me know if you're interested. Then I'll send a web link to you (via. Mail or PM) where you can find the lyrics.
I hope tthat someone is interested, I don't want to have unpretty mistakes on my album

 

[xenophobe]

Well, I read a few of the songs on your web site.... (you do have a link to them in your profile )

Most of them are okay, but here and there, it sounds like you've translated...

It's actually kind of hard to describe...

If I tried to tell you what you should do to make them a little more proper, you would have to do some more major rewrites.

I'd say just keep them how they are...

 

[Domson as TIOBS]

Thanks for your reply
Well it depends on which songs you've read, cause there's a lot of really old stuff there
And the lyrics I want you guys to "control" are not published on my homepage yet Only "Grove Of Shadows" could be checked, it'll probably be chosen as song of the year 2002 by my "fans"