Listen to my inverted hellspawn.

I'm not really a big fan of that kind of music with bad production like that but it seemed alright, i didn;t hate it so it must be good since i don't like that kind of music.
 
there's no melody in it mate, its fucked, so much distortion its worse than nirvana...get soem help ok!
 
i think it needs some revision ... some appendages are not too bad ...

keep it up :D