"Massacre" needs your ears

[lilhermiejobo]

Hey guys, I haven't had anything to offer to the rate my mix/tone section for quite some time now. I've been battling writer's block for ages and just haven't had the motivation to see a project through to the end so this is my first "complete" effort in hopes that it'll spawn several others.

This is a basic mixdown: stereo drums, 2 rhythm guitar tracks, single mono bass track. This is as far as I got regarding the writing process. I guess I'm happy with whats here because I couldn't be bothered to do anything else with it. The only thing I would like to finish would be a guitar lead during the 1/2 time section towards the middle of the song.

I'm clueless when it comes to writing lyrics and laying vox so if anyone would be interested in that let me know either here or in pm.

I'm looking for feedback on everything regarding the mix from guitar/bass tones, drums, levels and/or automation. Speaking of, there is absolutly NO automation on this which pisses all over any chance of sounding decent but I blame that on my laziness.

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Thanks for listening.

 

[eternally_gutted]

what did you make for guitars? it sounds amazing.

 

[lilhermiejobo]

Thanks, dude!!! the guitars are just schecter c1 plus > pod xt pro using the criminal amp model through treadplate cab and some LP on the stereo bus.
I was worried the guitars sound sterile because I can never get a good tone.

 

[lilhermiejobo]

huh huh huh, 69 views. huh huh huh.

so like, does anyone wanna do vocals or something?
this sucks.