Mastodon Ripoff Riff Mix, Please Critique.

[Keith!]

Here's a 1 minute song I did with a riff I ripped off from Mastodon's Blood & Thunder song.

My first real mix of myself and would appreciate what you guys think.

There are 2 guitars done with my POD 2.0 and the drums are Logic general midi.

I mastered it using Isotope Ozone 3.

Is it to bright?
Does it need more mids?

Cheers.

http://www.yousendit.com/transfer.php?action=download&ufid=2FCD4D2730BE298D

 

[MX582]

uhh that doesnt sound anything like blood and thunder lol