Melodic and (a little prog song), first mastering.

[mjgg6]

Hello there dudes, thats the first time I try to master a song. I think that there are to much things to improve let me know please.

Recorded with: ENGL screamer and JMP 1 with impulses, superior a cheap cheap bass.

The vocal part is not added yet so it will sound a litte empty...

Thanks in advance.

http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1872595/music/SAD.mp3

 

[mjgg6]

Hello again... I have added the vocals here, please let me know how to improve this mix. I have used the Logic mastering.

Thank in advance.
Manuel.


http://dl.getdropbox.com/u/1872595/music/Siervo Perdido corta.mp3

 

[samara]

mwahahahahahaa sorry but the vocals are lol sounds like eros ramazotti... doesn't fit the music... I don't know what style you were trying to acheve but it sounds weird.... or maybie I'm just too used to hearing death metal

 

[samara]

sorry for not talking about the mix (which was what you asked oppinion on) hmmm the vocals could be a bit lower and guitars need more treble Imo....

 

[mjgg6]

mwahahahahahaa sorry but the vocals are lol sounds like eros ramazotti... doesn't fit the music... I don't know what style you were trying to acheve but it sounds weird.... or maybie I'm just too used to hearing death metal

Sounds like death metal to you really??? Maybe youre right, to be honest I´m not trying to achive any style I just recorded the music and a friend of mine wrote the lyrics and sang what he wanted to... and Eros Ramazotti I could expect anything but that...

Thanks anyway for the opinion.