Melodic Deathcore / Deathmetal (first mix + song I've ever been happy with)

[Ollie_H]

http://soundcloud.com/oli_hunt/newsong

Done on cheap 2.1 speakers with a right speaker that doesn't work, so probably quite dodgy. Written while recording so some bits are cut up and moved around or looped, so transitions are a bit weird in places but I will fix that. Let me know what you think / how I can improve it. Thanks!

 

[oroinvictus]

Guitars sound pretty out of tune. The lead almost sounds like it's pushed to the left, and it needs to come way up in volume. Right at 0:48 and for the duration of the track, the guitars sound heavier on the right than anything else. The drums sound robotic and get buried under the guitars, except for that one crash cymbal.