Melodic hardcore/Djent style song

[foundations]

this is relatively unmixed, i will be re submitting this soon when i have spent some time on it
jus want some opinions on this as a pretty much dry mix

Also would like someone to do vocals and send me the file so i can mix it in, that would be cool




EDIT:
heres the mixed version

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15846363/2 step mix.mp3

 

[Triscore]

not sounds bad man!!, with more time this would be a killer sound

 

[foundations]

not sounds bad man!!, with more time this would be a killer sound

cheers man, literaly about to start mixing it now, any suggestions in particular?

 

[Sam Bottner]

Pretty cool man, you have lyrics written? I might be able to find someone to do vocals if you want.

 

[Folkrav]

Snare pretty loud! A little more opened guitar sound, and kick is too clicky for my taste. But nice song, you're on a good track!

 

[foundations]

Pretty cool man, you have lyrics written? I might be able to find someone to do vocals if you want.

cheers, i dont have lyrics written but im realy keen to get someone to post sum vocals for me to mix into it, the new version of this mix shoul dbe going up pretty soon aswel so keep an eye out

 

[foundations]

ive updated this with a mixed version in the description
its here 2

http://dl.dropbox.com/u/15846363/2 step mix.mp3