Melodic Hardcore/Metal One of my first mixes!

Listening on shitty headphones : Strange room reverb on the clean guitars in the beginning. The rest is ok but I would say the vocals stick out maybe a little. Work on them try a compressor.
 
The drums need work. The kick needs less volume and compression, it sounds like the kick head was made of paper. Snare needs some humanizing, as do the cymbals. Cymbals could stand to come up as well. Guitars need a lot more volume and gain, and I can't hear a bass track at all. Vox need to come down. I hear something weird going on at 3:25, is that supposed to be a chop effect?
 
i think its great for a beininer mix. yeah i hear alot of defeater in it like the intro guitars. i agree bring down the verb :) i love defeater.