Meshuggah esque mix/Rational Gaze

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I plan on doing a cover of Rational Gaze. I know I'm playing it wrong because I suck lol I'm working on it though. What do you guys think of the mix? I haven't had a chance to listen to it on shitty speakers like I like to before I post anything but here it goes.


http://dl.dropbox.com/u/9875484/Ration Gaze.4.3.mp3