Some of the "syncopated" sounding little reggae chords at :58 sound off time-wise.. and its especially obvious because those parts are also uncomfortably loud in the mix for me... but maybe the original is like that..
Kick drum could have a lot more punch later on.. and could be more friendly (sonically) with with the Bass guit. The kick sounds fine in the beginning, but becomes less effective on the heavier bits.
Arrangement wise but also revelant to the mix, I get bored by 2:45 because the spectrum isn't filled up.. My brain wants a rhythm guitar there, or for the bass to play a stronger role in the mix against your harmony-solo work.
This was fun and different to listen to, thanks for posting it. Nice work.
