To my ears, guitars are a bit low compared to the drums (though if a drums right upfront style is what youre going for it might be ok, but even then in parts I think too low still), vocals a bit high and you to get bass supporting the guitar low end and blending with the drums; the guitars and the drums are both just sort of hanging on their own there at the moment without proper gell. Even the heavy riffs have no real heaviness as a result, its rather thin.
I'd personally like to hear a bit more verb on the snare in particular and some more gunshot crack top end, but that may well just be me. It lacks depth now, all right upfront on the drums (slate?) + VST (or sounds like it) on the guitars and its a bit flat, needs depth somewhere.
Very clean and crisp though. Well tracked and played.
I really like the tune though, its cool.