metal mix critique!

[seedsofvengeance]

something too loud?? too soft? something sound terrible or brutal?? thanks!
its the track called demo 2
http://www.soundclick.com/kristrindl

 

[Thedeloshimself]

the bass hit is too loud keep it at 20hz so it doesn't distort. you need to record with a real amp and not a combo, how can you expect to get critiqued when you know you're not doing your best. I don't the transition that you changed. the lead guit at the begining sounds a little quiet, cymbals too loud

 

[Nebulous]

I'd work on your guitar tone. It's very "chainsaw" .