Metal Song feedback!!

asilaydying0305

New Metal Member
Mar 31, 2010
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Hi people! My friend and I have a recorded song. And although I know not quite what I'm doing wrong. It is not easy as I imagine it. Please can hear you at times and give me a feedback. Thanks!

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