Metalcore Song Architects-esque (Metal Foundry + Omnisphere Content)

[maryshore]

Hey guys,

got my very first mix with vocals here.
Please help me improve my vocal mixing and give me some tips.

Hope you enjoy it.

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/26227488/motionless_testmix_10.mp3

 

[maryshore]

not a single one? is it that bad?...

 

[alex-sonic]

I like it, maybe guitars are little bit too loud and have too much medium, it gave me headache at first listening! XD
Vocals are good I think!

Otherwise cool song! It's the style i enjoy listening

 

[maryshore]

Updated Mix:

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/26227488/maryshore-motionless.mp3

 

[AntonioPetrole]

Guitars sound waayyy to scooped and have no real presence in the mix. The vocals could come up a little bit. That kick could be more up front as well. The song is fucking badass though, I wish I had bands like this come my way

 

[alex-sonic]

Vocals are pretty good what is yoru chain?

 

[maryshore]

Thanks guys.
Vocals consist of 4tracks. 1 center and 2 panned hard left and right with heavy distortion + 1 verb track.
The chain is RVox -> DeEsser -> L1 -> PingPong Delay.

try to put some more presence in those guitars. I can't get amp sims to sound massive...

https://dl.dropboxusercontent.com/u/26227488/maryshore_new.mp3

 

[alex-sonic]

Did you make the 4 takes? They are really well done it seems like it's just 1 take!

 

[maryshore]

jeah we recorded everything 3 times. the panned tracks are a little lower than the main vocal track.