Mix-feedback request [metal]

[StefHartog]

This is a song from a demo/preproduction for a metal-album I'll start recording and mixing in a few weeks. This is the first metal project I have worked on, so I would appreciate feedback from people with more experience. I don't know what sub-genre this falls under, but to my non-metal ears, it sounds somewhere between Periphery and Textures

EDIT:

The end-result is streaming here:

http://soundcloud.com/selfmachine/selfmachine-breathe-to-aspire


Any and all critique is welcome. I have a very thick skin and appreciate blunt honesty!

 

[mairomaster]

It sounds great man! However, I'm not a pro.

 

[StefHartog]

Thanks for listening, I'm glad you like it. And don't worry about being pro. I'm no professional either

 

[StefHartog]

The end-result is streaming here:

http://soundcloud.com/selfmachine/selfmachine-breathe-to-aspire