Mix Help

[Josh Sheil]

Heres a link to a mix I've been working on:

https://dl.dropbox.com/u/131996650/A...inished].mp3

Fairly new to all this and just figuring stuff out so any help would be greatly appreciated!

 

[HaydenLM1]

umm, the guitars need to be more lively, they need more mids..
the bass guitar needs to be more bassy, and you can hear your kick drum! bring that up, i love my kicks really loud
the snare needs a boost on the 200hz..also the performance of the guitar in the verse (the riff) is played too far from the bridge which kills the notes!
the lead guitar needs less fizz and less low end, bring it down in volume aswell

hopefully that helped you since you are a beginners
any questions, ask