Mix need some help

[GearMan2point0]

I hate to rely on this forum to pretty much mix my mixes for me, which is not what I am intending to do, I just need to find the central point to mixing this stuff. I have three bands this week that are going to be recording with me. I need to find what exactly is missing, or what is sounding off.

thanks guys!
PLEASE HELP! despirate!
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/19450618/metal for you.mp3

 

[GearMan2point0]

bump ^