Mixing advice needed: The Ghost Inside - Engine 45 (cover)

[SeductionS]

I recorded this cover today and I need to know what can be improved and what is good. I can mix to my likings and I listened to it on different devices but my personal opinion isn't what counts with mixes.

So any advice at all would be helpful, thanks

 

[SkylarWanke]

Sounds very dull to me. Maybe just a little high end bump, but not bad at all!