Mixing tips please!

Guitar needs more bite, imo, but then again I love huge amounts of bite >:)

For more bite i generally add a very slight boost around 8-10khz, and a bit at 1.5khz for a more "in your face" effect, but that's just my personal taste, although it might help the guitar stick out a bit more in the first section :)

Also a bit more grind on the bass, but again, that's just my opinion and preferences for tones :p
 
Maybe pull back on the 9khz boost by a db or so, the discord stabs are starting to get slightly harsh, but definitely better for my ears anyway :)

maybe just turn the bass up a bit now, sounds slightly lacking in bottom end at the beginning :) again though, just my ideas and stuff, not saying they're right :p