Mixtest, crit please! Noob here!

[Kavar216]

http://soundcloud.com/cowsonthebeach/one-moar-bassless-toanz-test


Please let me know what you think, and how I can make this mix sound great. It is FAR from perfect, and I'd like to make it sound better!

Flameshield ON



Cheers, people!

There's no bass. I dono't have one, can't find one in the vicinity either, at least as of now.

 

[Customisbetter]

Gutiar tone is acceptable for now, but you need a bit more low nids, 500-750 area. The drums need work.

First off cut that click out of the kick. You want the kick to live in hte 60-200 hz range with a teensy bit of 5k for that click if its not inherent in the sample.
THe snare is just cut and no body. Id personally find another sample, but yo ucould also cut some of the highs and emphasize the 200 hz area. Maybe add a hard limter and some reverb to add depth.