man this is great but is a big downer and for only 1 reason, and it's the same reason most amateur films and music clips look amateur.
FRAMING!! the lighting, the set design, the make up, and the color editing is all fantastic but this is let down by framing.
The worst thing from what I watched was a dead front on eye level with the singer. that shit busts my balls, it NEVER looks good in any film.
More thought given to the framing and shots would have been great but otherwise well done. It look's great otherwise and I'm sure I'd be very pleased with this myself despite a couple of cringe worthy shots. So CONGRATS!