Originally posted by FrostGiant
Pretty good. If ya want my opinion, I'd a kept the bird out. I think it makes it a little cluttered up there. And the tree should be behind both angels, as they are the same size. It screws with the depth perception the way it is. And the tree needs some black highlights (highlights?) on it to give it some texture.
The concept really links nicely with the font though. But if you can, eliminate the line down the middle of the R in SATURNINE. When I look at that, all I see is the R.