My first mix, need some help

I agree, I think it's a really good first mix. The tighter the performance is (or editing you do to get it that way), the better it will sound sonically, too, so keep that in mind. Just start thinking about "polishing" because it really does sound like a good start to mixing!
 
Right on, I appreciate it. I used Pod farm for the guitar tracks because no matter what I did to record the guitars with my 6505+, it sounded terrible.