My first mix, need suggestion !!!

[dreamsfrag]

Hello, this is very nice place.
My first post and also my first attempt to mix my band's song.
Only EQ apply to the song, any feedback is much appreciated.

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/default.cfm?bandID=924803&content=music

 

[ahjteam]

The playing on the rhythm guitars is kinda loose, could be a lot more tighter. And the lick at the beginning sounds like its out of tune. Like we say here in Finland "ei se nyt ihan susipaskakaan ole, mutta ihan vitusti paremminkin voisit vetää", which is roughly translated: retrack. I can also hear some digital clipping in the guitars, but I'm not sure if it is the soundclick player or your tune. Also theres this unwanted fizz and mud on the guitars and not enough mids.

And the vocals are kinda low, turn them up

 

[dreamsfrag]

And the vocals are kinda low, turn them up

Thanks for your advise.