My First Mix!

[Damian B]

Hello all! This is my first post, my first mix, and my first time dealing with well recorded tracks! I have been ghetto recording in my basement for years (and technically "mixing" I guess)... but this is my first time using correctly recorded tracks. They are form the tech death thread, so I didn't record them or anything, but I wanted to see what you guys thought. I am by know means any good at this, and I made no attempt to master the track, so it's pretty "raw". What do you think, what can I improve upon?
Thanks

http://www.box.net/shared/unppeimpd6

edit: sorry, I just realized this should go in the rate my music thread, ooopps