My first Peavey 5150 clip - neeeeed help!

[HollowmanPL]

Hey everyone

Today I've been trying to record my new amp - Peavey 5150.
After few hours I've done something like this:

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=924869&songID=8945014

What do you think about it? Isn't it a little bit raw? I see there is no br00tality in this sound and I've no clue what to do now.
I can upload raw guitar tracks and someone could tell me what's wrong with them?

every comment is welcome!

cheers

 

[Deltones]

Where in this clip don't you see any brutality? You're asking if it's a little bit raw, but the first question would be: Do you like it yourself?

It doesn't sound bad at all. At first listen though, I would be hard pressed to differentiate your sound from anybody else.

 

[Harry Hughes]

Could try putting some bass guitar in there.
Guitars don't just sound automatically "br00tal" and huge by themselves bro, bass guitar is half the guitar tone

 

[HollowmanPL]

there is a ''huge'' bass guitar in the background, belive me

I don't know where's the point to get it sound huge - rec. mix, master or everything...

 

[hoehlentroll]

I dig the guitars. They have a nice crunch!

 

[LethalShredder]

Sounds good on my end...

 

[Oak]

I think it sounds good.

Sounds a lot like Dismember on Massive Killing Capacity, but more hi-fi

 

[Rex Rocker]

sounds good here too, but the bass (not sure if it's the palm-mutes, I think they are) get a bit out of whack at times.

 

[HollowmanPL]

thx guys

Today's clip:
I think it's a little better than the one before...
How do u like it?

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/page_songInfo.cfm?bandID=924869&songID=8961536

 

[HollowmanPL]

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