The song was pretty mediocre.
And here's what I think of the rest: I like them, you seem like a talented guy, but it's all the same thing over and over again. You don't incorporate anything new into your music. This is why so much metal becomes boring after a while, too little diversification.
Sabbath, Death, Opeth, Maiden, they all tried different things. Zeppelin, Beatles, Who, Floyd, they tried different things. And that's why they're so popular. They're not one-dimensional, which is what your songs are.
I'm sorry to break it down for you. You can look at this in a positive way and try to learn from this, or you can be your usual self, insult me, cut your wrists and have dreams of raping Britney Spears.