My Mix, What do you think?

[Mozzfist]

Hello would be awesome to get some criticism on a mix im working with

Here´s a little sample, tell me what you think!

https://soundcloud.com/colorthesky/mix

 

[oroinvictus]

This needs a lot of work. The guitar tone should be redone from scratch, it's just all high-end pick attack with no actual tone. No audible bass guitar. Drums are inaudible for most of the 25 seconds.