my new mix and first master test (critique please!)

[premx]

so here's my new mixtest with one of the firsts attempt to master it too.
let me know what im doing wrong so please critique it.

anyway here's the link
http://dl.dropbox.com/u/5308644/something.mp3

help me get better!

thanks :]

 

[Masticore]

A little to much mids on guitars, overall the sound is pretty balanced, maybe a little guitar heavy for me, but nice none the less.

 

[Robert W]

Either the guitars are too loud, or the drums are too quiet.