My newest mix! Need some critics

[IlhamMR]

I just recorded this short instrumental, i think the whole mix was ok,
but i need some critics from all of you, because i'm a human not god

 

[EnjoiTrent]

The mix needs a little more wideness, and I can't really hear the kick at all. Otherwise, overall It sounds good.

 

[IlhamMR]

thanks for your advice bro! i'll try, i'll do my best, haved you ever mix your own? let me hear that so that i have a reference for mine

 

[EnjoiTrent]

https://soundcloud.com/glacier-recording-studio/song-demo-1
Here's a quick mix I did today, I think it sounds pretty good.

 

[Soundscaper11]

I think the guitars need more low end growl versus lots of mids. It sounds thin